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“Your heart is pure,
and your mind clear,
and soul devout”
An upsetting reminder of my fallacy of a past.
A recollection of the lie we lived.
A little white note; simultaneously an unbearable memory and a dim ambition.
Do you remember the innocence?
Do you remember the beginning?
We were so young;
so naïve;
so pure, so clear, so devout.
Do you miss those days?
The days of clear summer skies,
before the sky turned black
before the floods began
before I drowned in an ocean of chaos and our own blood;
reaching a hand infinitely into the clouds,
searching for something to save me;
your loving summer hand.
When will this addiction break?
When do the withdrawals stop?
I’m sick of the fucking cuts.
Please, just make the bleeding stop;
why does love hurt more than hate ever could?
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This poem is very different than my last one, in the way that I wrote it. This took me about and hour or two of uninterrupted emotional writing while the last one took about a week of careful planning for each line. This is more of a train of thought poem. Not sure how I like it, might change it at a later date.
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:iconzdarlight5:
I never knew you wrote poetry Kyle, this poem has a lot of meaning behind it and I like it because it is very relatable, I love the last line the most … I demand more poems! :sun: ~
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Thanks Emma! I haven't logged on here in forever.
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:iconhollysdestiny:
I like it, I think pure emotional writing that's raw is better than something carefully constructed, but that's just me. I like reckless emotions, and impulses.
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~Hanu-Bis Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, this is a great piece!
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